money offered for postgraduate research is limited; as a consequence, some people argue that financial support from the government should only be provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly believed by many people that scientific
research
is much more important than
others
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research
and money should be only divided for scientific
research
. I firmly disagree with
this
opinion and I think that money should be apportioned for both scientific
research
and
others
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research
. In the following paragraphs, I shall put forth my arguments to support my views.
First
of all, I believe that scientific
research
is quite significant, but it is never everything in today’s modern world. Even if scientific
research
leads
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the development of technology and science, postgraduate
research
plays a very important role
for
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individual skills.
Furthermore
, it may help to become distant from the era of consumption. Take people who are researchers in any country as an example; if postgraduate
research
is supported by governments, scientific activities may easily be maintained and researchers could gain academic and educational qualification for their future career.
On the other hand
, there is no doubt that supporting postgraduate
research
may end in some new work opportunities.
In other words
,
this
research
could soften the side effects of unemployment, which result in dramatically decreasing the level of unemployment.
Moreover
, the income level of
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society can increase
in particular
.
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offered by the government for postgraduate scientific
research
is necessary to improve the quality of life. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the budget of the government should
also
be divided for postgraduate scientific
research
because
this
investment contributed to both technological
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and new job opportunities.
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