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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is an idea, that everyone will use online
books
 and
newspapers
 in the upcoming future,
instead
 of spending money to purchase the printed versions. I totally agree with
this
 statement, since
this
 way of reading is much more effective.
To begin
 with, online reading systems are rapidly developing day by day, so reading
books
 and
newspapers
 online are going to become even more easy and comfortable. Nowadays, people have an access to most of the libraries with huge
books
 collections all over the world, so there is no longer a need to search the book or newspaper edition through many libraries and stores.
For example
, there are limited editions of
books
, that are sold in
few
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 particular regions and stores, which means that people, living in other countries or cities cannot buy them.
However
, they can easily read it online without travelling or going to the bookshop.
Secondly
, the number of online libraries, providing free access to read or review
books
, is increasing.
Potential
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The potential
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 reader can find any book of any genre required and download it on his own device for free just in a few seconds, while the traditional method of reading requires to visit the bookshops and buy it. If a person will decide to have his own home library or likes to read a lot, he has to spend lots of money to do that. Taking everything into consideration, there is a chance that people will rather read online, rather
that
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than
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 buying
books
,
newspapers
 or magazines in the future, because it seems to be much more beneficial than the original method used before. In the future, nobody will buy printed
newspapers
 or
books
 because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this
 statement?
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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