In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Every day the internet becomes influential in people's lives. Users of the Internet will be allowed to find any
information
and read it online in the future and no one will purchase printed reading stuff. Printed newspapers
and book are the past of humanity, mankind will process all information
online in the future. I partly agree with this
statement.
Readers can easily get information
from the Inernet
, using devices and gadgets. Nowadays everybody may use Correct your spelling
Internet
smartphone
to read news or book. Many routine Add an article
a smartphone
the smartphone
stuffs
are introduced in current technologies. Change the wording
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
For example
, in Add an article
the iPhone
iPhone
everyone can use application “Books” and download own wishes by books. Modern technologies provide comfortable consumption of Add a comma
,iPhone
information
and give an opportunity to read all kinds of information
from small
device. Add an article
the small
a small
Furthermore
, printed newspapers
are not convenient to carry everywhere. It takes big space and readers may forgot
Change the verb form
forget
this
stuff.
Despite all facilities of online using information
from the net, it is completely impossible without being charged. For instance
, smartphone
will lose all charge after a while. Add an article
a smartphone
the smartphone
Moreover
, exposing their eyes to the monitor of the laptop and phone could damage their vision. In the future, replacing printed newspapers
and books with online news and e-books would therefore
mean cutting off the rest of the world from this
part of society.
In conclusion, online reading of books and newspapers
is convenient and better nowadays, even if there are some inconveniences. Each person can use the information
in a convenient form.Submitted by zhadyra.serikbayeva2016 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite