In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Every day the internet becomes influential in people's lives. Users of the Internet will be allowed to find any
information
and read it online in the future and no one will purchase printed reading stuff. Printed
newspapers
and book are the past of humanity, mankind will process all
information
online in the future. I partly agree with
this
statement. Readers can easily get
information
from the
Inernet
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Internet
, using devices and gadgets. Nowadays everybody may use
smartphone
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to read news or book. Many routine
stuffs
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are introduced in current technologies.
For example
, in
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iPhone
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everyone can use application “Books” and download own wishes by books. Modern technologies provide comfortable consumption of
information
and give an opportunity to read all kinds of
information
from
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device.
Furthermore
, printed
newspapers
are not convenient to carry everywhere. It takes big space and readers may
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this
stuff. Despite all facilities of online using
information
from the net, it is completely impossible without being charged.
For instance
,
smartphone
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will lose all charge after a while.
Moreover
, exposing their eyes to the monitor of the laptop and phone could damage their vision. In the future, replacing printed
newspapers
and books with online news and e-books would
therefore
mean cutting off the rest of the world from
this
part of society. In conclusion, online reading of books and
newspapers
is convenient and better nowadays, even if there are some inconveniences. Each person can use the
information
in a convenient form.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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