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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Reading printed newspaper or
books
 will be unpopular and disappeared, since in the future we will live in the age of technology, including online reading without paying.
However
, I believe online-readers never can replace
paper
-based reading.
First
 of all,
real
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the real
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 and obsessive reader enjoys the touching pages and smell
paper
. In
this
way
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 you feel
as
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like
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 a character of
book
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the book
a book
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, who is running through the streets or finding new adventures with friends. By touching the pages, in which written story cannot be true you get a ticket for
journey
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the journey
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 of your fantasy.
For instance
, thanks to the famous writer Ray Bradberry, who made a lot of fantasy masterpiece about the space his fans found an alternative way to see what is almost impossible to see. Because of these
feelings
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 a lot of readers appreciate the
paper
books
 and choose them nowadays.
Secondly
, because of research nowadays
popularity
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the popularity
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 of
books
 between teenagers increased recently. One of them is that scientists found you can remember information gotten by
paper
books
 much better than reading the same book on an e-reader.
What
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 means you can return to the plot faster and recall a story with much more details. It is
incredible
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the incredible
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 ability of our brain, especially when you are reading an adventure, fantasy ones and novels. Our future in the hands of youth. Since our young people are interested in
this
, while many readers appreciate them for the feeling, I believe that the popularity of
paper
books
 will never subside.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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