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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The technological revolution has brought humanity into a new era of development where almost all
people
 have access to information. Many
people
 believe that in the
future
 there will be no need for
newspapers
, as they will be replaced by online news sites. I agree with
this
 statement because
in
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,in
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 the
future
,
newspapers
 will gradually lose their popularity. There is no doubt that
people
 will have free access to information via the Internet.
In addition
, many magazines and
newspapers
 have their own blogs where articles are
also
 published. For
this
reason
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people
 think that in the
future
newspapers
 and magazines will be replaced by their online counterparts. Undoubtedly, there will
also
 be those who prefer to read traditional
newspapers
 and books. But in the
future
, a new generation will get used to mobile technologies, as the current printed
newspapers
 are obsolete. They are paid, too large, they are inconvenient to carry with you and each new newspaper must be purchased separately each time.
Finally
, in the
future
,
people
 will read online
newspapers
, but
this
 will not happen soon, as there will be those who prefer regular
newspapers
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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