:with a growing population ,many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM food .What are the advantages and disavantage of doing this

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means “Growth

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food

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of meats and

vegies

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that we eat

everyday

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contain

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some

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bads

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bad

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our body but it

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a

lot

of positive point in it. As long as we know,

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that are unnatural

are

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bad and when we eat

these kind

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of

food

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these

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this hormone

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hormone

,we probably

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unnatural as it has changed our chemical

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in our

body

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.

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research, young generations

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are growing faster

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to the

last

10 years generation ,

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is because all the

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has contained

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GM

, so when these kids

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fast they will develop early puberty which brings them side effects

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Stunned Growth,Behavior Changes,etc… Another problem is when a

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of animals

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the best example. When many cows are produced they will release a

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of methane gas

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farting which is

type

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of

green house

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gas and increases the rate of global warming .

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our

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but

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there are consequences for doing

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project .

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my opinion,there are reasonable reasons that scientist still

prefer

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GM

food

because it

satisfy

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the

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human need . Imagine one day ,we have to feed more than 7

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people and

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the

food

manafactures

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manufactures

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cannot demand for everybody if we

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inject

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not only

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demanding but

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a

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time and money for farmers so

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is a very good point too. In conclusion,we can see it is not totally bad if we

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more

GM

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to demand people need . As long as we exercise regularly and eat less meat more

vegies

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or fruits ,we still can lead a very healthy life like others .So we not

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look for the bad points of

GM

food

but we

also

gain benefits from it .