Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Akshay Shrivastava. I am writing

this

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letter

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to request you to please check for my offer

letter

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which I forgot at your hotel Park Avenue

Munbai

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Mumbai

on 12th

january

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January

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. There was a job event for three days at your hotel in

conference

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the conference

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hall and

room

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number 304 was

alloted

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allocated

allowed

allotted

to me. I

remeber

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remember

that it was in my bag when

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left the

room

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on 14th

january

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January

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which was the

last

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day of

event

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the event

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. I went to

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conference

confernece

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the confernece

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room

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for a meeting and

than

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then

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I took a bus to my hometown. I believe, I forgot my offer

letter

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conference

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the conference

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. I request you to please inform

you

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your

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whole staff about it. So that if any gets the

letter

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they can handover to you.

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Also

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,Also

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would be great if you can check my

room

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as well. Once you find the

letter

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please give

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me a

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call so that

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can come and pick it up from the hotel. Looking forward to hearing from your end Yours

Faithfuly

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Faithfully

Faithful

Akshay Shrivastava

akshayshrivastava1992

Feb 17, 2021

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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