Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Akshay Shrivastava. I am writing
this
letter
to request you to please check for my offer
letter
which I forgot at your hotel Park Avenue
Munbai
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Mumbai

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on 12th
january
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January

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. There was a job event for three days at your hotel in
conference
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the conference
a conference

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hall and
room
number 304 was
alloted
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allocated
allowed
allotted

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to me. I
remeber
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remember

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that it was in my bag when
i
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I

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left the
room
on 14th
january
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January

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which was the
last
day of
event
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the event

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. I went to
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conference

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confernece
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the confernece

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room
for a meeting and
than
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then

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I took a bus to my hometown. I believe, I forgot my offer
letter
in
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at

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conference
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the conference

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. I request you to please inform
you
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your

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whole staff about it. So that if any gets the
letter
they can handover to you.
Also
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,Also

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I
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it

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would be great if you can check my
room
as well. Once you find the
letter
please give
a
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me a

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call so that
i
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I

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can come and pick it up from the hotel. Looking forward to hearing from your end Yours
Faithfuly
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Faithfully
Faithful

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Akshay Shrivastava
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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