Grandparents take care of the children when their parents are out at work. What are the advantages and possible disadvantages of this?

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Nowadays, an increased number of both fathers and mothers are employed and spend a great deal of their day at work,
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has made concerns over the
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upbringing
and care of their
children
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.
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,
grandparents
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are taking
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role
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caring for the kids. Despite the fact that
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has numerous advantages,
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nevertheless
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it is
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associated
with drawbacks as well.
Grand fathers
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and mothers have dramatically reduced financial costs of
parents
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.
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, they have
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role in alleviating the cost of childcare
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and
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has made it possible for
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to save larger sums of earned money.
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to
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, leaving
children
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with
grandparents
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rather than having a babysitter, relieves a lot of stress and anxiety on the
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shoulder
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of
parents
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. They feel their babies are more secure and are in safe hands.
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in a study done by a group of psychologists in Japan, mothers who left their baby with their
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were much more psychologically healthier and had
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anxiety disorders and panic attacks.
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,
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is only one side of the issue.
On the other hand
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,
children
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who are left with their
grandparents
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are at risk in two ways.
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,
grandparents
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tend to
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and become lenient towards the child resulting in making the child obstinate and indisciplined.
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, If
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are too old, they can not handle and rescue
children
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in any case of emergency.
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, Back in time, my brother was left with my grandmother, because my mom was teaching at school and my dad was at work.
Oneday
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One day
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, he burned his feet with boiling water and due to her poor vision, she could not take him to hospital. In conclusion,
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parents
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who keep an eye on
children
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,
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can be
exteremely
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extremely
helpful in relieving financial and
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psychological
burden of
parents
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.
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,
this
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can lead to indisciplined
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behaviours
behaviour
or might pose risk to the child's life.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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