In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different from those of the previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many countries around the world
shows
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the rate of eating
habits
and
life styles
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lifestyles
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of youth
people
are changing, compared to the previous time.
People
believes
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that
this
problem may lead to unhealthy living. According to
this
problem, I believe that
the
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parenting behaviours are involved in the
children
eating
habits
.
Moreover
, the advertisement od fast
food
product
are
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now advanced marketing which may attract
to
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the
children
customers rather than the past. It is
tendency
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to believe that
children
’s behaviour
are
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developed by families.
Particulary
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Particularly
, eating
habits
were provided by parents to their
children
since they were infants.
Therefore
,
the
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children
eating
habits
are significantly changed due to their parents' eating
habits
. For examples, If parents had provided fast
food
or junk foods to their child since they were young, the kids might get used to
this
type of
food
and may consider it to be their
first
choice of diets.
Moreover
, technologies and advancements in
advertisement
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the advertisement
an advertisement
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of
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for
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fast
food
business are now better in
food
industry systems.
For example
, KFC which is the big
fast
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fast-food
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food
company in the world
is always launch
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the toys
attach
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to the meal.
This
type of advertisement
cause
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the
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huge advantage to their company because the
children
were interested
to
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their foods and buy them without
realise
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realising
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about nutrients in them.
Thus
, the marketing of
food
companies
are
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now beyond in technologies and strategies compared to the previous century. From
this
point of view, there are many several factors that show the trends of eating
habits
in
children
.
However
, there
are
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another point that
people
should mention
on
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children
eating
habits
.
For example
, Changing or training the
children
to realise about
negative
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the negative
a negative
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effect on their health should be provided by parent and schools. To obtain the successful goals of changing
in
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behaviours,
children
could be taught at the initial period of life. In conclusion, I believe that there are several factors
can
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lead the
children
to
negative
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a negative
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effect on their health due to eating
habits
and lifestyles that are changed from the previous generations.
In contrast
, many factors can be controlled by
people
in
this
generation as well.
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