In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different from those of the previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many countries around the world

shows

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the rate of eating

habits

and

life styles

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lifestyles

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of youth

people

are changing, compared to the previous time.

People

believes

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that

this

problem may lead to unhealthy living. According to

this

problem, I believe that

the

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parenting behaviours are involved in the

children

eating

habits

.

Moreover

, the advertisement od fast

food

product

are

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now advanced marketing which may attract

to

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the

children

customers rather than the past. It is

tendency

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to believe that

children

’s behaviour

are

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developed by families.

Particulary

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Particularly

, eating

habits

were provided by parents to their

children

since they were infants.

Therefore

,

the

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children

eating

habits

are significantly changed due to their parents' eating

habits

. For examples, If parents had provided fast

food

or junk foods to their child since they were young, the kids might get used to

this

type of

food

and may consider it to be their

first

choice of diets.

Moreover

, technologies and advancements in

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the advertisement

an advertisement

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of

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for

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fast

food

business are now better in

food

industry systems.

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, KFC which is the big

fast

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fast-food

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food

company in the world

is always launch

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the toys

attach

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to the meal.

This

type of advertisement

cause

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the

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huge advantage to their company because the

children

were interested

to

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their foods and buy them without

realise

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about nutrients in them.

Thus

, the marketing of

food

companies

are

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now beyond in technologies and strategies compared to the previous century. From

this

point of view, there are many several factors that show the trends of eating

habits

in

children

.

However

, there

are

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another point that

people

should mention

on

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children

eating

habits

.

For example

, Changing or training the

children

to realise about

negative

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the negative

a negative

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effect on their health should be provided by parent and schools. To obtain the successful goals of changing

in

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behaviours,

children

could be taught at the initial period of life. In conclusion, I believe that there are several factors

can

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lead the

children

to

negative

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a negative

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effect on their health due to eating

habits

and lifestyles that are changed from the previous generations.

In contrast

, many factors can be controlled by

people

in

this

generation as well.