You have just read an article in an international magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine: Correct the information in the magazine Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a regular reader of your travel magazine “The Wanders”. I would like to draw your immediate attention
towards
the article that was published in your Change preposition
to
last
edition January 2020 under the name explore- Holy city
Amritsar.
There are few details about my city
which are not accurate as published in your magazine. Firstly
, Amritsar airport has direct connectivity to various countries such
as Dubai, London, Canada and many more. So, it has now become hassle free
for the tourists to reach the destination. Add a hyphen
hassle-free
Secondly
, Golden
temple is not the only tourist place in Correct article usage
the Golden
this
city
. There are many other tourists attraction and most of them has
a direct link to the history of Punjab. Now it has become easier to learn about the heritage and culture of Punjab by merely visiting these places Change the verb form
have
such
as Sada Pind, Haveli and Gobindgarh Fort.
These erroneous facts may confuse the readers of your esteemed magazine and may affect the number of visitors planning to visit the Holy City
. So, I would like to request you to kindly re-print the article with the correct details in your next
edition.
Yours faithfully,Submitted by jyotikhera_2 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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