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Some people say that instead of preventing climate change we should find a way to live with it. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #climate #change
Climate
change
 is a significant problem for the whole
world
. It is commonly believed by many
people
 that living with
climate
change
 is easier than producing a solution and we had better learn to live with it.
However
, I firmly disagree with
this
 given statement and I think that we could reduce the damage of
climate
change
 even though it is becoming more and more developed. In the following paragraphs, I shall put forth my arguments to support my views.
To begin
 with, struggling with
climate
change
 plays a vital role
for
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in
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 the future of the
world
.
In other words
,
this
 is a problem not only for humanity but
also
earth
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for earth
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 and animals in today's modern life.
Moreover
, if
this
 problem could not be solved quickly, the
world
 would encounter the danger of extinction.
Likewise
, preventing
climate
change
 can provide advance both human and other things which are located in the
world
. Take the use of fossil fuel as an example; if
people
 would rather use renewable energy at house and workplace, they can decrease dramatically the disadvantages of fossil fuel
such
 as coal and petrol etc.
On the other hand
, learning to live with
climate
change
 is never the best way to solve problems.
Therefore
,
this
 provides a temporary solution due to continuing damage.
Furthermore
,
people
 think that what they do is correct if the government does not take some precautions.
Therefore
,
people
 continue to harm the
world
.
For example
, about 70% of
people
 living in the UK recycle their rubbish and they use it at home
as
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 electricity and heating. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
climate
change
 is quite a significant subject and it should not be ignored because these measures can soften the side effects of
climate
change
.
Submitted by Ahmet Münir KOCAMAN on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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