Some people say that instead of preventing climate change we should find a way to live with it. Do you agree or disagree?

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Climate

change

significant

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problem

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whole

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world

. It is commonly believed by many

people

that living with

climate

change

is easier than producing a solution and we had better learn to live with it.

However

, I firmly disagree with

this

given statement and I think that we could reduce the damage of

climate

change

even though it is more and more develop it. In the following paragraphs, I shall put forth my arguments to support my views.

To begin

with, struggling with

the

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climate

change

plays

vital

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role

for

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the future of

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the world

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In other words

this

is a

problem

not only

humanity

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for humanity

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but

also

earth

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for earth

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and animals in

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today’s modern life.

Moreover

, if

this

problem

could not solve quickly, the

world

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the danger of extinction.

Likewise

, precautions in relation to

climate

change

can provide advance both human and other things which

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located

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the

world

. Take the use of the fossil fuel as an example; if

people

would rather

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use renewable energy at house and workplace, they can decrease dramatically the disadvantages of the fossil fuel

such

as coal and petrol etc.

On the other hand

, learning to live with

climate

change

is never

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way the solution

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problem

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the problem

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Therefore

this

provides a temporary solution due to continue to the damages.

Furthermore

people

think that what they do is correct if

government

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the government

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do not take some preventing.

Therefore

people

continue to harm the

world

For example

, about 70% of

people

living in the UK recycle

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rubbish and they use at

house

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the house

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as electricity and heating. In conclusion, I strongly believe that

climate

change

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significant subject and it should not ignore because these measures can

be soften

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the side effects of

climate

change

Submitted by Ahmet Münir KOCAMAN on Wed Feb 17 2021

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

climate change
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