Some people say that instead of preventing climate change we should find a way to live with it. Do you agree or disagree?

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Climate

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significant

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problem

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world

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. It is commonly believed by many

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that living with

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is easier than producing a solution and we had better learn to live with it.

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, I firmly disagree with

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given statement and I think that we could reduce the damage of

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even though it is more and more develop it. In the following paragraphs, I shall put forth my arguments to support my views.

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with, struggling with

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the future of

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not only

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earth

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and animals in

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today’s modern life.

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, if

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could not solve quickly, the

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encounter

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the danger of extinction.

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, precautions in relation to

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can provide advance both human and other things which

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located

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the

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. Take the use of the fossil fuel as an example; if

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would rather

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use renewable energy at house and workplace, they can decrease dramatically the disadvantages of the fossil fuel

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as coal and petrol etc.

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, learning to live with

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is never

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way the solution

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provides a temporary solution due to continue to the damages.

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people

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think that what they do is correct if

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do not take some preventing.

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continue to harm the

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, about 70% of

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living in the UK recycle

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rubbish and they use at

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as electricity and heating. In conclusion, I strongly believe that

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significant subject and it should not ignore because these measures can

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the side effects of

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Ahmet Münir KOCAMANWed Feb 17 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

292 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

climate change
prevent
adaptation
mitigation
cope with
effects
shift
mindset
lifestyle
balance
invest
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