Through out history, it is found that male leaders had led world towards violence and conflicts. The world would be governed better and peacefully if female were leaders. what is your opinion?

Since ancient times, human society is primarily dominated by Men.
Therefore
most of the
leadership
for different civilizations was always been masculine. Some people view
this
as
a
Change the article
the
show examples
main reason for violent and chaotic world history and
hence
they promote female
leadership
. I strongly believe against
this
concept, as I view
leadership
as
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
gender independent skill.
To begin
with, human history is blotted with a lot of blood spill. But it will be wrong to relate it to a specific gender as it is driven by two main elements grid and power. Both these elements have
tendency
Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
show examples
to corrupt the sane human mind.
For example
, Many Kings & queens have invaded other realms on
pretext
Add an article
the pretext
show examples
of either occupying land and resources or under the shadow of
egoistic
Add an article
an egoistic
the egoistic
show examples
cloud of
false
Add an article
the false
show examples
assumption of their strength. We can take
entire
Add an article
the entire
an entire
show examples
1st world war as an ideal example of
this
fact.
However
, These traits are not limited to male leaders.
For instance
, there are many notable female presidents from South Asian countries, responsible for triggering violent wars which caused
death
Correct article usage
the death
show examples
and destruction of their citizens. It is equally true that
leadership
which brought prosperity to their subject
also
came from both sides of the aisle. Margaret Thatcher and Jawaharlal Nehru can be seen as
a shining examples
Correct the article-noun agreement
a shining example
shining examples
show examples
of
this
statement, Which
further
proves
leadership
is not
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
gender specific
Add a hyphen
gender-specific
show examples
and rather it is a person dependent skill . In conclusion, as per my viewpoint, taking the entire community in
a
Correct article usage
the
show examples
right direction is the holey task. As men
has
Change the verb form
have
show examples
dominated most of
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
human history it is tempting to blame them for all the sins of the past.
However
,
that is
not true and
leadership
shall be seen from
gender-neutral
Add an article
a gender-neutral
show examples
perspective.
Submitted by Aarush_2014 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: