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Through out history, it is found that male leaders had led world towards violence and conflicts. The world would be governed better and peacefully if female were leaders. what is your opinion?

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Since ancient times, human society is primarily dominated by Men.
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 most of the
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 for different civilizations was always been masculine. Some people view
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 as
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 main reason for violent and chaotic world history and
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 they promote female
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. I strongly believe against
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 concept, as I view
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 as
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 gender independent skill.
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 with, human history is blotted with a lot of blood spill. But it will be wrong to relate it to a specific gender as it is driven by two main elements grid and power. Both these elements have
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 to corrupt the sane human mind.
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, Many Kings & queens have invaded other realms on
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 of either occupying land and resources or under the shadow of
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 cloud of
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 assumption of their strength. We can take
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 1st world war as an ideal example of
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 fact.
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, These traits are not limited to male leaders.
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, there are many notable female presidents from South Asian countries, responsible for triggering violent wars which caused
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 and destruction of their citizens. It is equally true that
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 which brought prosperity to their subject
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 came from both sides of the aisle. Margaret Thatcher and Jawaharlal Nehru can be seen as
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 of
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 statement, Which
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 proves
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 is not
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 and rather it is a person dependent skill . In conclusion, as per my viewpoint, taking the entire community in
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 right direction is the holey task. As men
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 dominated most of
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human history it is tempting to blame them for all the sins of the past.
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,
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 not true and
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 shall be seen from
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 perspective.
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