The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2020 there may be as many as 40 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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. Some people support

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encouraging alternative forms of transport and introducing laws to control car ownership and use. From my perspective, I totally agree

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given statement because other types of

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indeed can substitute normal

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and it is necessary to control the usage of automotive

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with, admittedly, there are various kinds of helpful transportation methods that can be used to replace fossil fuel

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. One apparent category is public transportation, especially underground, taxi and buses. The uses of those motors can

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deliver individuals to their destinations with lower carbon dioxide emissions.

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, nowadays, it becomes more common to use electric shared

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, which have

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the same function as people’s own motor

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with less pollution.

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, bicycles, including the one that uses electricity and the normal one, are beneficial for human’s health when use them to travel to and back from working frequently.

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, there should be regulations on

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of private wheeled

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in order to protect the environment. If governments still did not take any actions, the result would be disastrous.

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, ice glaciers in polar areas would melt caused by large amount

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gases. I hold a pessimistic view that the community can cope with even a small rise in sea level well. Thousands of people would lose their jobs, homes, and even life, especially in the coastal cities, and the potential of spread of famine and disease would be huge.

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society would be more unstable, and citizens might lose

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the country.

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, the curb on the number of

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using is necessary for every nation in order to prevent

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consequence happened. In conclusion, I totally

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the opinion that other forms of transport should be encouraged to substitute

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using right now, and it is essential to set laws to regulate

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the usage

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of motors

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