Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

in a flourish globe , technology is more powerful than a human. it is
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very useful and same time it is overloaded in human life. the
computer
is always preferred more priority than the
library
. in
this
technology world , totally waste of money on
library
maintaining. I shall put forth my arguments to support my views. The
first
and foremost merits anywhere and anytime we could
use
the
computer
for anything
such
as articles and read books or story extra. for ,instance we
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go somewhere and we need to do some write articles than we can open the
computer
and search online .
furthermore
,we get myriad articles on one page.
secondly
, we have no anytime limit we can utilize whatever we want . ,
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we are no needed for any kind of cards . for ,example if we go
first
time
library
we incumbent have
library
card membership.
on the other hand
, some demerits over here , if any person has an eye problem like blindness they could not
use
the
computer
they would only options
library
.
for instance
blind from ,innate that person could not
use
the
computer
but they will
use
the
library
. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that the
library
is not everywhere so the government should stop wasting money on
library
maintaining . The government should spend more money on technology than blindness people
also
can
use
.
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  • preserving historical documents
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