Some people feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is clear that advertising has developed and widely used lately.
However
, it is thought that there are some drawbacks
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advertising, I believe it has many benefits for
people
and businesses. In
this
essay, I will discuss both views and show my opinion. On the one hand, advertising has some negative impacts. one of which is that it affects personal judgement about a certain product. To illustrate, advertisements aim to stress
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the bright side of any product neglecting its advantages which,
as a result
, may lead to misleading the consumers. another reason is that some types of advertising can be misused as a ploy.
For example
, Telemarketing, which has spread upon the evolution of cellphones, is being used by dishonest
companies
who entice their victims with slick prices and delusive offers.
Such
companies
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reputation among
people
which,
accordingly
, may lead to their failure and sometimes exposure to legal liability.
On the other hand
, I think that advertising has many positives in favour of
people
and businesses as well.
This
is because
people
now get to know where to find whatever they need easily and rapidly by using
advertisement
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.
Moreover
, competition between several
companies
of the same service through offers and discounts pours into
individual’s
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interests. Advertising has brought up huge opportunities for unknown
companies
and businesses, especially, minor projects, to be able to introduce themselves to their local communities and sometimes globally.
Hence
, their profits might increase which helps the country’s economy flourish. Overall,
although
advertising affects personal judgment and can be deceptive in some cases and may end
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business, I wholeheartedly agree that it helps to decrease prices of services and increase the profit of
companies
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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