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With a growing population many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. what are the advantages and the disadvantages of doing this.

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Recently there has been a
noticable
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noticeable
 rise in population. It is thought that genetically modified
crops
 should be increased. In
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 I shall explain the possible positive and negative impacts of
such
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one
 hand,
production
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the production
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 of more genetically modified
foods
 results in many advantages.
one
 of which is increasing the rate of agriculture outcome.
this
 is because genetic engineering aims to come up with
crops
 which are more productive and with
longer
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 life span.
Accordigly
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Accordingly
, main cereals like wheat, corn and rice
anre
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are
 expected to fill the needs of
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nowaday
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 elevated population.
Additionally
, vegetables which used to rotten in
few
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a few
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 hours or days are now modified to
last
 for
one
 to two weeks, so they can bare being shipped to far places without being damaged.
For instance
, original tomatoes used to rotten from two to four days maximum, but they were treated to sunrise for over two weeks recently.
Such
 development , indeed , affects positively
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the country’s economy.
On the other hand
, using genetically modified
foods
 may have some drawbacks.
One
 disadvantage is that it causes dangerous diseases. To illustrate, as scientists change the characters of natural vegetables and fruits, they,
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definitely
, use
chemical
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 substance which eventually affects our health causing dreadful sicknesses
such
 as cancer.
For example
, according to
a
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research conducted by the
Fuclty
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Faculty
 of Agriculture at Zagazig University in which 5000 volunteers who consume GM
foods
 participated in the research, about 10% of the participants developed different
concerous
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cancerous
 diseases. Another disadvantage is that
,
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 the industry of producing organic natural
crops
 would recede. Due to the almost impossible competition between them and the productions with cheap prices
compaired
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compared
 with organic
crops
.
Consequently
,
investers
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investors
 who own
farm lands
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which
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 plant organic
foods
 may lose their jobs affecting the country economy negatively. To conclude, more GM
foods
 result in many advantages as increasing food production and quality, while they may have many disadvantages as affecting our health and vanishing
organic
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the organic
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 food industry.
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