Advances in science and technology and other ares of the society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that science and technology are essential. Over the previous century, different science fields have developed to serve in improving our way of living and decreasing the rate of humans morbidity
in addition
to it is thought that witnessing the current era is ultimate. I agree with the latter and I shall elaborate on the reasons throughout
this
essay.
Firstly
, living during the recent period has become easy and convenient. To illustrate, the revolution in industry and technology has produced appliances and machines that downsizes the effort people used to make for household chores, crafting and all blue-collar jobs.
For example
, women used to suffer while doing all their household missions
such
as washing clothes, swiping the house, cooking and washing dishes. But after the appearance of machines,
such
as fully automatic washing machines, hoovers and air fryers,
such
chores are done easily which saves
time
and effort,
as a result
, they spend more
time
with their families.
Secondly
, witnessing the current
time
is amusing.
This
is because people can travel to any place using fast transport vehicles.
Additionally
, the film production industry has reached high technology called (Three dimensions) which allows the audience at the cinema to feel as if they are inside the movie context. Videogames and smartphones now
also
serve as entertaining devices that can be used in releasing stress and keeping people happy;
however
, their abuse can affect social skills. To conclude, due to the facilitated life and amusement our current
time
offers, I assume that it is the best
time
anyone dreams to witness.
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