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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller ?

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As compared to an earlier scenario, the majority of people these days are going out on trips frequently than before and
this
 change of preference for travelling is been published in many research papers submitted by New York Times in association with Harvard Business School. There are few factors which have led to many
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 opting to travel than staying indoors and the key main factors for
this
 change is in the overall an experience of travelling which has become more surreal and comfortable, where you can reach remotest of destination with multiple modes of transportation reducing travel time.
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, another reason being an increase in disposable income of
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 especially among millennials since they have a new outlook towards life and want to explore new places and undertake adventure compared to their older generation who weren’t much risk-takers. As per
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done by RBI and IMF, more than 40% of income earned by these young task force
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 on vacations and exploring new avenues because of which there is a boom in
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 industry for
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 2 years. There’s an
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 positive experience that travelling brings out in the traveller.
Firstly
, it helps individuals learn about the diverse background that co-exits in our society and
this
 perspective building of diversity helps them in their careers ahead when they join multi-national companies.
Secondly
, travelling
also
 helps to reduce stress by rejuvenating the mind, body and soul by providing an individual break from their day-to-day routine life. Since, travelling is helping society connect to their inner self and rejoice their time to relax from mundane chores,
hence
 more and more people are now opting for travelling than previously.
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