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Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

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In
this
 era of advanced technology, it became very easy for
people
 to download copyrighted
music
 and
books
 from
internet
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, even without any charge. There are many different views for
this
developement
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development
,
however
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,however
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 I would like to discuss the positive and negative outlook of it. To look at the positive perspective, downloading
the
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copyrighted
music
 and
books
 eventually make them available to
maximum
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 public. The more reach to the
people
 the more fame the artist and
writter
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writer
 can
recieve
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receive
. Sometimes the
books
 and CDs are so expensive that
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general
gereral
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 public can't afford them and remain unaware of
knowldge
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knowledge
 and entertainment.
Hence
eaisly
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easily
 available
high quality
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music
 as well as more intellectual
books
 can
definately
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definitely
 make a better
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 in the society.
On the other hand
, when we look
in to
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 the hazards of it,
definately
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definitely
 its dangerous thing to pirate
the
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origanal
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original
music
 or
books
. It damages the potential content it makes them cheap and ultimately less valuable.
Moreover
, the artists
also
 suffer from
such
nuisence
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nuisance
 and the
people
 who are far less talented try to overpower the
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original
 writers and singers as well as
music
 composers.
This
 may cause
social
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 threat to the intellectual ones and
hence
 should not be
encourged
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encouraged
. The
people
 who sell
such
 stolen
music
 and
books
 earns far more than the original
arist
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artist
 and
this
 is
absolutely
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 injustice to the real composer. That's why
its
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 better to discourage the use of
pireted
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pirated
printed
pirate
music
 and
books
. After discussing both
the
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views, I would like to conclude with the opinion that, there must be strict rules and regulations against piracy and
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original
 content should be promoted
with
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an affordable rates
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 for the benefit of
the
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society.
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