Instead of asking the government to bear the cost of higher education, students should pay tuition fees themselves. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

High university

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fee usually brings a heavy financial burden to

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. For

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reason, a number of people support the view that it is the responsibility of authorities to pay

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expenditure off for all

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. From my perspective,

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a policy would be beneficial to society as a whole. Undoubtedly, the cost of providing free higher

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is tremendous since millions of

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per year will be involved in

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a large-scale project. Under the limited government budget,

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newly-added expenditure will force the state to either enlarge its budget deficit or cut the spending on other necessary areas.

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, free

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tends to attract many people for whom

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education

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is not necessary.

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, many occupations

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as taxi drivers rely mainly on physical work and training for the specific domain.

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of educational resources may be wasted under the state’s subsidy.

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, I believe that the benefits are twofold.

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of all, a number of

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are not able to afford the ever-rising cost of

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fees, for which they usually need to borrow student loans.

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debt has become a heavy burden on the

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and may affect their academic achievements.

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may need to work on several part-time jobs and are

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unable to concentrate on their studies. Under these scenarios, the aid from the authorities can effectively reduce their financial pressure and

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could focus more on their study.

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,

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-fee-free

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can help the state to attract high-quality

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both domestically and worldwide. Take the universities in HK as an example, the government pays the majority of the

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fees for the local student, which motivates them to study domestically

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of going abroad. With higher quality

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, the colleges are more likely to produce influential researches and improve their long-term reputation. To put everything into consideration, despite a great cost and a considerable waste of

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resources, I support those who argue that the authorities should pay the

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fee for university

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since

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policy not only releases the heavy monetary burden for

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but

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contributes to the reputation and long-term development of the domestic colleges.