Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The discussion about whether the prime aim is economic development or the importance of other kinds of improvement is equal for a

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raises a thorny question in today's complex society.

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it can be argued that all sorts of progress are crucial for a nation, I strongly believe that

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has to come

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. There are several reasons why it is utterly essential for a community to develop in all types of fields. Though it sounds pretty fair, sometimes it is unattainable to reach

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goal for

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society. It is because the

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could not possibly distribute its resources to all fields of the

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at a time.

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, the

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would need a gigantic budget to develop

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meaningful areas

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as education, manufacture, medical care,

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and so on.

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, even though theoretically it is possible, practically it is not straightforward to succeed. I would argue that governments have to focus on

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economics which is one of the supreme purposes. From my perspective, the legislation is in the

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place, after that economics falls to

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close and the field of

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has to be in the

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rank to develop for the

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. To put it simply, if people do not comply with the law and rules, other attempts are void.

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, economics makes a significant contribution to the nation to be strong in all situations. In case

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field improves in a

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, it is much likely to affect all other kinds of progress positively.

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but not least, the organisation of the

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is

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crucial in each

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in a rapidly changing world. Again, if

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economy

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development does not exist,

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the

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will not be improved. In conclusion, despite some people claim that all means of progress of the

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have to be equal, I am inclined to believe that the

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thing that the

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should do is to improve

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economy

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. From my point of view, before the

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, the legislation is the

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and foremost aim.