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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language as primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

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Due to the advancement of
communication
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 system,
language
 plays an indispensable role in everyone's life. Some believe that studying and
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 foreign
language
 at primary
school
 is more effective than
secondary
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school
 for youngsters. I firmly believe
this
 trend, on a whole, bring some more advantages than disadvantages.
Drawbacks
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 and benefits of
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 essay. Vividly, learning a new
language
 in primary could have some
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 for pupils.
Firstly
, I think
children
 at young age pick up
language
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 is much
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faster than teenagers because they are more flexible and adaptable,
also
 in
this
age
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 their brain cells grow remarkably.
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, naturally,
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the
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 tender age as
children
 or more curious to learn new things so fluency in an unfamiliar
language
 can be achieved in elementary
school
. I strongly believe that learning a new dialect
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 numerous opportunities for youngsters in
their
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 future. If the students embark
learning
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 early, they will be experts in the
language
 by the time they are in high
school
. Significantly, they do not have to make extra effort to understand the different concepts of the
language
,
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 they already know them instinctively. There are certainly a few drawbacks to learning another
language
 at
very
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 young ages.
For example
,
children
 are too young to understand the depth of the
language
,
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 they are not intellectually mature enough.
Also
, it could be an extra burden for
children
 to learn
million
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 languages at a time. In conclusion, despite certain disadvantages, I certainly believe that learning a foreign
language
 as soon as possible is way more effective.
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