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Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial by making international travel more accessible, while others argue that it has had a very negative impact. Discuss both view and give your own opinion

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In recent years there
have
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 been an increase in the number of
air
 flights.
This
 is due to the reduction in prices for these trips, some quarters argue that
this
 trend has more advantages, while others have contrasting opinions.
Both
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 these views will be analyzed before an opinion is given. On one hand, the primary advantage that discounted
air
 ticket provides is that it enables
people
, regardless of social status, travel to attend events or meetings.
For example
, in ,Canada there has been
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increase
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 in the number of flights that go in and out
the
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 city, mostly for official purposes.
Consequently
, leading to improved productivity in workplaces.
Furthermore
, there is an increase in revenue generation due to tickets being available to anyone at a low cost.
On the other hand
, the noise pollution created by aeroplanes can be a menace to the immediate environment.
For instance
,
people
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 of
Kansas
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 community wrote a petition to the Virgin Atlantic airline concerning the disturbance it endures, particularly during the descent of a flight.
However
, engineers from Presto are already developing noiseless
air
machineryair
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machinery air
 machinery that will produce very reduced sounds during its operation. In my opinion, the reduction of
air
 travel costs poses more benefits, because it helps citizens to save money, and
also
 contributes to profits accrued for airlines. To conclude, when
air
 transportation is provided to
people
 at a good discount it ensures there is improved efficiency in companies, and
also
 helps
people
 to save money, that could
otherwise
 be used for other aspects of life
such
 as Education and Feeding
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