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In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?

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In recent years, the number of
mature
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person
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 is gradually growing in several nations. There are some advantages and disadvantages of
this
 tendency.
This
 essay will discuss both points with relevant examples. On the one hand, there are two main merits of
this
 trend.
Firstly
, aged
people
 have more experience
of
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 life. They can guide and advise
the
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youngsters to achieve their goals.
For instance
, a survey shows that old retired
people
, who are
the
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part of an educational institute, like to utilise their time in teaching and giving life lessons to
future
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the future
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 generation.
Secondly
, senior persons are more punctual and disciplined than adults.
In addition
, they are well versed with the tradition and culture of
the
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society. To illustrate, in a join family, children
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 their elders and follow their customs
accordingly
.
On the other hand
, a few negative aspects are
also
 taken into consideration. The
first
 one is that if there are
older
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 person,
the
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more health care facilities are required for them which amounts to a burden on the country. The
second
 one, that old
people
 are not able to generate income after their retirement
therefore
 they become invaluable for the economy. To conclude, despite some drawbacks
this
 trend has more positive effects on
the
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society. The negative effects can be substitute by making the best use of knowledge and experience of elder
people
.
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