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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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In the coming days, people will stop buying paper-based
books
 or news, as it is easy to
access
 the required
information
 online free of cost. I completely agree with
this
 view, as reading online is the fastest and cheapest way to
access
information
.
Firstly
, people need to spend money on different printed
materials
 to read different
information
.
For example
, a person looking for both, movie articles and technology-related
information
, need to buy different
books
 related to their specific topics which are expensive whereas ,in the online world, humans can
access
 a different number of subjects without paying any additional cost.
Secondly
, online study helps to
access
 the same
information
 from different sources with no additional cost.
For example
, a person looking for some political news can read the
information
 from different online media sources sitting in front of the computer and understand the news from different angles and prospectives whereas, in the case of print media, he has to buy different newspapers from different places which are again a costly and time taking process.
Moreover
, online reading is just not only free and fast but,
also
 saves a lot of paper which is a great benefit to the environment. In conclusion, no one in the future prefers to read printed
materials
 like
books
 and newspapers as they are expensive when compared with online
materials
 which are easy, inexpensive, and fast to
access
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content. I totally agree with
this
 view, that the upcoming generation will tend to read paperless online
materials
instead
 of paper-based
books
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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