Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his/her garden. You and your family members are having problems with the animals - introduce yourself - tell the problem - suggest solutions

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Dear sir, I am Gurpreet your next-door neighbour actually I am writing

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letter to complain about the problems me and my family which are facing because of your pets. I moved here just

last

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week

ago

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with my family we are seven members of the family me , my husband my parents and my uncle. ,Actually I am a student here usually I

am doing

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study at

night

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because during the day I always on my job but at

night

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time your two dogs start barking all

long

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night

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which is

created

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very difficult for me

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, we can't sleep well because of them. just one day ago my mother was

doing

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gardening your one pet

jumping

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jumped

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there my mother was scared of him and

saves

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saved

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her life in a difficult way. It would be very kind of you if you take some steps

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this

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will be good for us.

According to

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,me you have to keep them separate at

night

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because when they are together

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then

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they

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creating

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create

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a lot of noise and in the

day time

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daytime

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you have to give proper attention if they cut someone

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that will be very dangerous for everyone. I

have

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hope you will understand my problem and you will take action on it Yours Faithfully, Gurpreet

Submitted by gurpreetd272 on Mon Feb 22 2021

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task response

Clearly address all the points mentioned in the task prompt, and avoid going off-topic.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure a clear and coherent structure throughout the letter, with proper introduction, body, and conclusion. Use appropriate linking words and cohesive devices.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

215 words

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