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Some people think that public health of a country can be improved if the government make laws regarding nutritious food but others think that it is the matter of personal choice and personal responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Health
 is an important aspect of every individual. To stay fit one must maintain a balance between body and mind. While some people will argue that for being healthy, the government should imply rules regarding healthy foods to improve public
health
. In
this
 essay we will discuss both the views and I shall give my opinion on both the aspects
To begin
 with, for having a healthy life everyone should need a strong discipline towards their fitness goal. A good life needs dedication towards their fitness goal, proper diet and good physical activity. The person should be
health
 conscious to improve his
health
. well-being is the personal state of well being and having stress free life. To improve our
health
, it's our primary responsibility to monitor our well-being and to do regular exercises. Only we can help ourselves to push our limits. On the other ,
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 people believe the government has a primary
role
 to establish a healthy community.
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 has
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 in spreading awareness and implying rules on toxic foods.
However
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 cannot help every Individual to stay fit. It's our personal choice to choose the correct way to stay healthy. To sum up, an individual has a primary
role
 in maintaining their well-being. The
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government
 plays a
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secondary
role
 by spreading awareness to keep the nation healthy
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