day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on whether or not
ownership should be discouraged and
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should encourage people to utilize public
much more. In my opinion, I totally agree with
, it is undeniable that travelling by public
of private automobiles may ease traffic jams, especially in big
. To be more specific, it would take more space on the road if all citizens commuting to work by their own cars, so sharing trains or buses is a good alternative way keeping more
off the road. Several
as Tokyo, Berlin and Paris, with
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network of buses, trains and subways experience no gridlock by any means,
obviously not only carries more passengers but
free the road space, leading to traffic jams reduction.
, encouraging urban inhabitants to use public
can be a cure for the air problem of
. It seems that
is one of the primary culprits causing smog in dozens of
throughout the world. If commuters choose
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transit system, the number of private cars will decrease significantly.
As a result
, the amount of
exhaust gases entering the air would go down. Singapore,
, is one of the cleanest
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in the world, thanks to its excellent public
system, which is the key factor contributing to the reduction in
users and harmful smoke emitted.
In conclusion, I believe that if the government can raise people’s awareness of using public
to replace private cars,
will definitely help alleviate both congestion and air pollutants, improving the quality