Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Few people argue that extracurricular

activities

like

music

, crafts and acting should be given the same priority as other syllabuses of the class, particularly to the lower grade students.

This

essay will completely agree with

this

statement. In my opinion, extracurricular

activities

will help

children

to learn new things quickly and give relief from the stress.

Firstly

,

activities

like drama,

music

and art will help

children

to improve their understanding levels.

Children

's are more attractive to the play way learning and these type of

activities

help them to understand things more easily.

For example

, painting helps a child to hold and control the pencil properly in a playful way and makes his job easy when he started learning the writing of alphabets.

Secondly

,

children

are more attractive to arts like singing and drawing. The whole day of classroom sessions

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children

feel stressed and difficult to understand the subjects. These arts help

children

to take a break from their routine classroom sessions and spend some time on extracurricular

activities

to refresh and regain their energy.

For example

, if a

music

or painting session is added as a subject to their mid-day syllabus, the

children

can boost their energy while learning the

music

or painting as they are more attracted to

this

kind of

activities

and

this

helps them to focus on the other subjects for the rest of the day. In conclusion, some demographics of society believe that students should have soft skills in their syllabus along with their regular subjects. I completely agree with

this

view, as these soft skills make

children

learn things fast in a playful way and keep them refreshed.