People used to live in the same city throughout their lives, but now they change where they live several times. What is the cause? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

Recently,
people
change their living
place
time
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to time due to various reasons.
However
, in the past, they lived in one
place
forever. Even though
,
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moving from one
place
to another is
quiet
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expensive, I believe it is a positive development in the long run. The most compelling reason for changing the city where you have born and raised is seeking
for
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better opportunities. Most of the young
people
go to new places to acquire better academic qualifications.
For instance
, some rural areas often do not have reputable universities.
Hence
, students move to
urburn
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cities to complete their tertiary education. Not only young but
also
middle-aged
people
also
are moving to acquire better
employments
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employment

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. In most of the countries, better employment opportunities are concentrated in main cities.
As a result
,
people
move to these places to uplift their living conditions.
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of positive aspects can be obtained from
this
trend.
Firstly
,
people
can expand their horizon. Many
people
in villages do not have comfortable
life styles
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lifestyles

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because of poor transportation facilities, schools, healthcare systems and so on. Once they move to
better
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a better

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place
, they can get a better
life style
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lifestyle

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.
Secondly
, only distinct cities have reputable universities as it takes a lot of effort to maintain high standards.
Therefore
, young
people
can most likely achieve academic success and develop their skills by moving out
from
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their home town.
Thus
, there are several merits of moving
place
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to
place
. In conclusion, in recent years,
people
tend to change their living places to obtain better exposure. I suppose
this
is advantageous as they can acquire comfortable life standards as well as education.
Hence
, no one should be reluctant to change where they live.

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