Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

Media these days is highlighting the stories of successful individuals from ordinary backgrounds who were not great performers in their
school
days.
Moreover
, many are
school
dropouts as well.
This
essay will delve deeper into the possible causes of
this
and discuss the precursors to succeed in life. To commence with, the educational system at present has not seen many changes in the past century.
Furthermore
, we still follow traditional teaching patterns and subjects to impart knowledge. Many students may not understand
this
conventional pattern of learning.
However
,
this
does not reflect their inability to learn but shows the gaps in the educational system that makes it beyond comprehension for some students.
For example
, degrees and certificates can help you get a good job and earn a decent salary
however
, starting a business requires defining a vision
that is
rarely covered in the
school
curriculum.
Hence
, it is obvious why some
school
dropouts still build on their innate skills and walk on the path of
success
.
This
being said, there are many factors that can make a person successful
in addition
to inborn skills.
Firstly
,
success
demands hard work and determination to reach your goals.
Secondly
, commitment and loving one's job
also
play an important role when defining
success
. Take ,
for example
, Kim Soek Jin who was neither a good dancer nor a singer is now on his way to get the most prestigious Grammy's award which was only possible because of his strong will and perseverance. In conclusion, having an innate skill can act as a catalyst to achieving
success
but
nonetheless
,
success
is a byproduct of investing a lot of hard work and determination in a job that you love.

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