Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Regional language is the lifeline of any region. Being a foreigner, living abroad you need to be familiar with it else you have to face consequences not only socially but
also
practically as well
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This
essay agrees with this
notion for the following reasons.
Vernacular plays a significant role in the economic growth of a country. Firstly
, all the local shops and local vendors speak their native language only and to get a job one must be familiar with it, else you will not be able to survive in that region. For instance
, a survey conducted by The British Government found that organizations prefer candidates who are good with soft skills irrespective of the fact how
someone is good with their technical skills and Correct word choice
that
this
is an add-on to their resume. However
, the openings were for core technical profiles.
Human beings are social animals and depend on others for their emotional well being
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well-being
Additionally
, to get socialize we need to connect with people on day to day basis and soft skill
have always been an important part of communication. Fix the agreement mistake
skills
So if
we are not comfortable with it Rephrase
If
then
we will be unable to convey our thoughts to the people around us and this
may impact our public as well as
our personal life
. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
For example
, once I have
visited Paris for Unnecessary verb
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office related
work and stayed there for a week. I felt left alone for almost two weeks because I didn't know Add a hyphen
office-related
the
French.
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To conclude
, In my opinion, of course, there is a truth in the argument that one should know how to speak a foreign language otherwise
it will lead to repercussions emotionally and financially as well.Submitted by mayur.gupta44 on
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