The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
These
pie
charts
depict the vital reasons
for people to immigrate to the UK and the emigration
from the united kingdome
in 2007.
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Kingdom
Overall
, there were six different reasons
for migration. It can be seen that the significant percentage in both pie
charts
was difinte
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definite
while
the smallest proportion for immigration
was no reasons
stated, for emigration
the reason was formal study.
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,emigration
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jobs
immigration
was 30%, meanwhile
in the Add a comma
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emigration
the percentage was 29%. Add a comma
,emigration
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pie
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accounting for 15% to 13%.
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reasons
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in
immigration
, whereas
in emigration
for the same reasons
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in the Change the verb form
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immigration
pie
was 12% and 6% but in emigration
was 22% and 18% respectively. Also
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