Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear neighbour , I am writing
this
letter
behalf
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of
noise
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the noise
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from my house
firstly
I wanna say sorry to you . Recently my cousin sister visit
to
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us with her family . when all kids
together
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are together
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they make noise and
also
make music loudly. she is only for 15
dayshere
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days here
after that she just go back to her house . so
i
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realy
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really
feel bad because
this
noise
bother
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you . So
i
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just wanna say you
yhat
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that
i
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I
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tried my best to keep my children speak
little
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a little
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slowly and
i
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also
care about they
dont
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don't
make volume high for the music . so
me
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and my sister take care
for
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of
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this
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things . And
also
talk with my little ones about
this
hopefully they understand and enjoy that quality time with family .
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Thankyou
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so much in advance .
hopefully
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,hopefully
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you understand
this
situation better and
opologise
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apologise
apologize
us .
Thankyou
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