Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries,

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attendance is mandatory for all children up to a specific

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. In ,India

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is 14 years of

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. In the UK and many other ,countries it is 16,

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the UK government now has plans to raise the

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leaving

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to 18. I agree that children should be in

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till the

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of 18. In the following paragraphs, I intend to put forth my arguments to support my views. The most important reason for raising the academy leaving

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to 18 is that

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the

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of 14-18 is the most impressionable

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of a child‘s life. During

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period of adolescence, the toddler

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physical and hormonal changes because of which they are under a lot of pressure.

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, lengthening compulsory schooling helps protect childhood.

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students will be protected from some of the pressures in life. They have the rest of adulthood to work, make budgets balance and make choices. Providing them with space to grow for as long as possible can make them better prepared for adult life.

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, more study provides the opportunity to acquire more skills and

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more options. It has been shown many times that those with more science find it easier to find work and that they are more likely to find that work satisfying. What is more, raising the university-leaving youth is a crucial investment in society's future. Doing so increases the economic potential of the future workforce, and so will bring increased tax revenues in the long term.

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, the opponents claim that extending the period of incumbent education requires a huge investment in teachers, books and new

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buildings which would be very expensive. They

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say that many families need their children to make an economic contribution to the family income and working early can help these families to survive.

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, just being in

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does not guarantee that

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student is learning. Unwilling students become disruptive and damage the education of others in their class. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, as every garden has weeds,

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compulsory schooling

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has some drawbacks.

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, these drawbacks are nothing

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compared to the vast benefits

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approach would bring and the cost needed to implement would be negligible if compared to the huge economic potential of the future workforce.

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, I believe that everyone should stay in

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until the

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of eighteen.