Some educational systems make students study specialised subjects from the age of fifteen while others require students to study a wide range. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some schools prefer

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to

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a wide variety of

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after the

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of

fifteen

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whilst others have a contrasting viewpoint, they consider that they should

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those

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in which they want to settle their career.

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knowledge

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of every subject is vital, I believe because they have already studied these till the

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of

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so it is not crucial to continue it

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. On the one side, other

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provide basic

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which is vital for daily

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. While purchasing something, people need to check the prices of products. They have to examine

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whether the billing of the goods

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made correctly.

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, it is

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to test if they are not overcharged for anything.

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and taught by other

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.

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, Mathematics is the subject

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teaches how to make

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calculations,

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is required to be known by the common people. If

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common

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is not shared

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teenage

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, they will face

challanges

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challenges

in their

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. On the other side, these basic

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are already taught in primary schools. Now after the

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of

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,

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have to choose what they prefer to proceed in

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as their profession.

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, which

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are required to be learnt for

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. Rudimentary education is already provided to them,

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is the

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of acquiring professional

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. If

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is not gained, they may not achieve success in

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focused

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will save their

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and efforts. Their

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will be utilised in productive tasks only.

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, a recent survey state that if

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is motivated in

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tertiary

and senior secondary school, half of the

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of the

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will be saved.

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, focusing on the

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they prefer to excel their

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career

in will save their

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because basic education of all the

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is already provided to them in previous classes. In conclusion,

knowledge

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of all the

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is paramount to ease the daily

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but to excel in a

carrer

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career

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focused education is

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. In my perspectives, after

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aim should be on the selective

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only.