Some people believe that in the near future there will be no borders between countries, while others feel that national borders will always remain. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The discussion about whether governments are thinking of removing national
borders
with neighbour
countries
or
this
will remain unchangeable forever raises a thorny question in today's complex society.
Although
it can be argued that some claim
borders
will be disappearing in the near future, I strongly believe that it is not possible yet for some special factors. There are several reasons why many people expect not to see any
borders
between communities in a rapidly changing world. The main issue is that we could possibly be at the end of the globalisation era in which we are living. Today's events bring into the open some visible problems and it is obvious that
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globalisation, most probably, does not work anymore.
For example
, a new plague so-called Coronavirus has spread all over the world and scientists have not yet found any proper vaccine or any solution.
Therefore
, we need to change
this
era with
new
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one, which could require us to collaborate, cooperate and learn shared value with each other in order to solve common problems. In
this
case, there will be no need
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borders
, according to many. Despite
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arguments, I would argue that
borders
are still utterly essential for societies internationally. The foremost reason is that most of the
countries
would definitely be in the position of
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for some reasons.
For instance
, there is a huge animosity between Azerbaijan and Armenia, not only between governments
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but
also
nations.
That is
why, it is not available to open
borders
between
countries
like these, let alone knocking down front lines between them. Another measure could be thought that
countries
should be
in
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the same level in terms of living costs or other aspects. The prime example is that those who are living under the poverty line will move
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other developed
countries
illegally. And
this
is only one example, there will be numerous problems between
countries
in
this
regard.
Thus
, we have not yet reached
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that level where we need no
borders
. To conclude, in spite of some reasonable arguments of terminating
borders
among
countries
, I am inclined to believe that national
borders
will be seen for a long period. It is
also
anticipated that many
countries
from different regions of the world will co-operate with one another, but not eliminate
borders
.
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