Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with? How do you think space exploration will change in the future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Over the past decades,
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has experienced many developments in the field of
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exploration
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. Many facts have been studied and scientists have worked hard to achieve
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.
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, over time, a group of people began to argue that
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in
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area is more related to national pride, while others including me think that
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is due to the efforts that different
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are making to advance science.
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of all, nowadays many people associate
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in
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exploration
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with nationality, promoting it as national pride. Astronauts who flew into
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and participated in the
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of the galaxy are considered
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heroes of their nation upon their return to Earth.
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, American astronaut Neil Armstrong became a real national pride of the
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after the successful landing on the moon in 1969. Other
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began to recognize America as a developed
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and
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has brought many benefits.
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, now there are international contracts that were made for the development of science, namely
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exploration
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.
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exploration
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is an important stage of progress not only for one
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but for the whole world.
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, several
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can come together and help each other both financially and pedagogically to learn as much detail as possible. Even if some developed
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have the opportunity to fly to other planets, it is necessary to join forces with other
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to work effectively, since
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flight is not an easy task.
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, people should not forget about the importance of
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international contracts for the development of humanity. To conclude, an astronaut who has flown into
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and who have achieved
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will benefit his
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, making a good impression of
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country
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to others.
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the
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of the world should not take into account
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nationality and race when it comes to project works
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