Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with? How do you think space exploration will change in the future? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Over the past decades,

world

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has experienced many developments in the field of

space

exploration

. Many facts have been studied and scientists have worked hard to achieve

success

.

However

, over time, a group of people began to argue that

success

in

this

area is more related to national pride, while others including me think that

this

is due to the efforts that different

countries

are making to advance science.

First

of all, nowadays many people associate

success

in

space

exploration

with nationality, promoting it as national pride. Astronauts who flew into

space

and participated in the

exploration

of the galaxy are considered

as

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heroes of their nation upon their return to Earth.

For instance

, American astronaut Neil Armstrong became a real national pride of the

country

after the successful landing on the moon in 1969. Other

countries

began to recognize America as a developed

country

and

this

has brought many benefits.

On the other hand

, now there are international contracts that were made for the development of science, namely

space

exploration

.

Space

exploration

is an important stage of progress not only for one

country

,

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but for the whole world.

Therefore

, several

countries

can come together and help each other both financially and pedagogically to learn as much detail as possible. Even if some developed

countries

have the opportunity to fly to other planets, it is necessary to join forces with other

countries

to work effectively, since

space

flight is not an easy task.

Therefore

, people should not forget about the importance of

such

international contracts for the development of humanity. To conclude, an astronaut who has flown into

space

and who have achieved

success

will benefit his

country

, making a good impression of

this

country

to others.

Although

the

countries

of the world should not take into account

the

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nationality and race when it comes to project works