As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. What are the causes of this trend and what are the effects on society?

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Undoubtedly, Family is very crucial for every individual as well as it helps in each and every moment. Due to the largely growing ,population people would like to be a small family. There are several reasons behind

this

and create a large impact on society which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs. In contemporary, the main reason is man-making money and huge expenses.

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, every person is working in

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modern era as well as they are more independent these days. Due to

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reason, each individual is capable to take their daily- living spend own and they do not want to share their own money with any family member. At

last

but not least, the other reason that everyone wants private space in their lives.

Furthermore

, the

generations do not like it if their parents ask any question regarding personal life.

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, if anyone put the question on any topic than children think that they are interfering in their life so do not respect to parent's decisions. Due to the more interference

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generation wants to live separately and make their own rules.

On the other hand

, it creates a huge impact on society.

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, there are several psychological and social problems occurring these days

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