As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. What are the causes of this trend and what are the effects on society?

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Undoubtedly, Family is very crucial for every individual as well as it helps in each and every moment. Due to the largely growing ,population people would like to be a small family. There are several reasons behind
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and create a large impact on society which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs. In contemporary, the main reason is man-making money and huge expenses.
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, every person is working in
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modern era as well as they are more independent these days. Due to
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reason, each individual is capable to take their daily- living spend own and they do not want to share their own money with any family member. At
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but not least, the other reason that everyone wants private space in their lives.
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generations do not like it if their parents ask any question regarding personal life.
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, if anyone put the question on any topic than children think that they are interfering in their life so do not respect to parent's decisions. Due to the more interference
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generation wants to live separately and make their own rules.
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, it creates a huge impact on society.
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, there are several psychological and social problems occurring these days
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • migration
  • limited living space
  • economic independence
  • nuclear families
  • social norms
  • isolation
  • mental health issues
  • real estate market
  • housing shortages
  • social care
  • extended family networks
  • public provision
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