Your friend has asked you to teach English to their child. However, you do not have any English books so would like to borrow some from your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter say which course you are taking describe the type of books you need to borrow ask to borrow the books

Dear Sir, How are you? I hope you are in good health, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I want to borrow your

books

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. I am Ajik your student, I have a friend namely Akbar who is a volunteer and is a teacher in one of the courses in Lombok, yesterday he called me by phone and requested an

English

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book, because he wants to teach a lot of children in the institute.

Due to

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this

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, I do not have any

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books

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at my home.

That is

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why, I remember that my teacher has completed

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about

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such

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as grammar

books

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, vocabulary and others.

Besides

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, I will join

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class with my friends to teach them about speaking daily activities. I would like to borrow your

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books

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for one month and after one month I will send your

books

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by post. I am highly thankful that you spent time reading my message, I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Ajik

Arni AqlinaTue Jun 17 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Try to make the structure clearer by separating different ideas into new paragraphs.

task achievement

Make sure to include more specific details about the books you need.

greeting and closing

You opened the letter nicely and showed you care.

task achievement

You explained why you need the books clearly.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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