The best way to solve environmental problems would be for the current generation to accept a simpler way of life for the sake of the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the current
generation
should live in a simple
way
of
life
to solve the environmental issues,
therefore
the
next
generation
can live in a better environment. It is indisputable that living in a simple
way
is the main notion for a sustainable
life
.
However
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the technologies are involved in our daily living especially in
this
generation
. I believe that there are other ways of living that
also
enhance our environment as well. According to
this
point of view, living
as
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a simple
life
might be suited for retired people who live in
suburb
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area and people who have
a certain jobs
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or money.
In addition
, city-dwellers are currently live with the limit in time and space, thereby it might have raised an emission from cars or increased plastic density in the city.
However
, a simple
life
is hard for children to
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in the present time.
For example
, cycling to schools
are
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limited by
parent
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in
this
generation
due to
traffic
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accident.
This
is the reason why a simple
life
is barely happen
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in the big city.
Furthermore
, there are many advance technologies that help our society became more eco-friendly.
For example
,
the
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car companies
such
as Tesla try to launch
the
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new technology in
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cars to drive without release
the
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smoke, by invented
the
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electronic cars and these
car
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are available now in America.
Moreover
,
the
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global food companies
such
as
McDonalds
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or KFC try to reduce
the
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plastic uses by invented
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paper utilities for their packages. In conclusion, there are various ways to protect our environments. I strongly disagree that the best
way
to solve environmental problems would
be
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only live in a simple
way
.
Hence
, the better in technologies to help our future living in sustainable should be more concerned by the
next
generation
.
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