The best way to solve environmental problems would be for the current generation to accept a simpler way of life for the sake of the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the current

generation

should live in a simple

way

of

life

to solve the environmental issues,

therefore

the

next

generation

can live in a better environment. It is indisputable that living in a simple

way

is the main notion for a sustainable

life

.

However

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the technologies are involved in our daily living especially in

this

generation

. I believe that there are other ways of living that

also

enhance our environment as well. According to

this

point of view, living

as

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a simple

life

might be suited for retired people who live in

suburb

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a suburb

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area and people who have

a certain jobs

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or money.

In addition

, city-dwellers are currently live with the limit in time and space, thereby it might have raised an emission from cars or increased plastic density in the city.

However

, a simple

life

is hard for children to

adapting

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in the present time.

For example

, cycling to schools

are

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limited by

parent

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a parent

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in

this

generation

due to

traffic

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accident.

This

is the reason why a simple

life

is barely happen

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in the big city.

Furthermore

, there are many advance technologies that help our society became more eco-friendly.

For example

,

the

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car companies

such

as Tesla try to launch

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new technology in

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cars to drive without release

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smoke, by invented

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electronic cars and these

car

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are available now in America.

Moreover

,

the

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global food companies

such

as

McDonalds

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or KFC try to reduce

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plastic uses by invented

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paper utilities for their packages. In conclusion, there are various ways to protect our environments. I strongly disagree that the best

way

to solve environmental problems would

be

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only live in a simple

way

.

Hence

, the better in technologies to help our future living in sustainable should be more concerned by the

next

generation

.