The best way to solve environmental problems would be for the current generation to accept a simpler way of life for the sake of the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the current
generation
should live in a simple way
of life
to solve the environmental issues, therefore
the next
generation
can live in a better environment. It is indisputable that living in a simple way
is the main notion for a sustainable life
. However
the technologies are involved in our daily living especially in Add a comma
,However
this
generation
. I believe that there are other ways of living that also
enhance our environment as well.
According to this
point of view, living as
a simple Change preposition
apply
life
might be suited for retired people who live in suburb
area and people who have Add an article
a suburb
the suburb
a certain jobs
or money. Correct the article-noun agreement
certain jobs
a certain job
In addition
, city-dwellers are currently live with the limit in time and space, thereby it might have raised an emission from cars or increased plastic density in the city. However
, a simple life
is hard for children to adapting
in the present time. Change the form of the verb
adapt
For example
, cycling to schools are
limited by Change the verb form
is
parent
in Add an article
a parent
the parent
this
generation
due to traffic
accident. Add an article
a traffic
This
is the reason why a simple life
is barely happen
in the big city.
Change the verb form
is barely happening
Furthermore
, there are many advance technologies that help our society became more eco-friendly. For example
, the
car companies Remove the article
apply
such
as Tesla try to launch the
new technology in Correct article usage
apply
the
cars to drive without release Correct article usage
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the
smoke, by invented Correct article usage
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the
electronic cars and these Correct article usage
apply
car
are available now in America. Change the determiner
cars
Moreover
, the
global food companies Correct article usage
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such
as McDonalds
or KFC try to reduce Change to a genitive case
McDonald's
the
plastic uses by invented Correct article usage
apply
the
paper utilities for their packages.
In conclusion, there are various ways to protect our environments. I strongly disagree that the best Correct article usage
apply
way
to solve environmental problems would be
only live in a simple Verify preposition usage
tobe
way
. Hence
, the better in technologies to help our future living in sustainable should be more concerned by the next
generation
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