Parents should encourage children spend less time on studying and more time on doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree?

In the present world, entering top universities is seen as the key step to

succeed

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, and many parents force their children to study more in order to achieve

this

goal.

However

, some people believe genitors should encourage kids to do more sports

instead

of acquiring knowledge. From my perspective, I agree that children should spend more time on the physical campaign.

To begin

with, a healthy

body

is

the

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base of doing everything. As all people know, physical

activities

provide opportunities for individuals to become strong, which allows students to study for a long time and benefits children’s growth.

For instance

, while a learner has an excellent academic performance in daily life,

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would be affected if he suffered from having a fever in the examinations. A strong

body

is more likely to avoid

this

situation.

Thus

, a strong

body

is the most basic factor that determines the success of every daily and academic task. Apart from the point mentioned above, paying more attention

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sports bring a variety of advantages. On top of being healthier,

such

activities

can improve juveniles’ interpersonal skills and social circle because most

sport

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activities

are teamwork.

For example

, a basketball team requires 5 people. Teammates tend to have

good

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relationship as they practice together and cooperate with others. It

also

helps each of them comprehend what is a team and what responsibility should take.

Therefore

, spending more time on physical campaigns can cultivate the understanding of teamwork, which is more and more significant in the present society.

In addition

, comprehensive development is increasingly welcomed in the modern world. In conclusion, I totally support the view that children should be encouraged to do more physical

activities

in order to achieve a stronger human

body

and grow comprehensively.