We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Several
people
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are in distress including those who are living beyond the boundaries. It is argued that not all of them can be helped and taking care of our own nation and surrounding
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should be the only concern. I somewhat disagree with
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statement due to many reasons which we will discuss
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with, a country developing an item of utmost need worldwide should be distributed beyond boundaries.
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will improve international relations among nations.
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, during covid, India exported vaccines across the border including countries like Brazil, U.S and France due to its efficiency in treating patients.
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acts have tied a strong bond with many countries.
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, goods produced extensively in one country can be transported to other nations which have high demands worldwide. Perhaps, an exchange of commodities can
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be considered a good option to fulfil each other's demand.
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, India imports Kiwi from New Zealand in exchange for sugarcane,
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, meeting the requirements of each other.
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,
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can
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reach out to each other across the border in the time of
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unforeseen events
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as natural disaster or civil wars. One
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example includes Khalsa-aid warriors who travel to a place where
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need help during the crises
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as flood, war, earthquake etc. To sum up, help should not be confined to one nation and should be granted to those who need it regardless of the country due to humanitarian grounds as well as
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point of view.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global interconnectivity
  • international cooperation
  • ethics
  • moral obligation
  • geographical borders
  • diplomatic relations
  • economic stability
  • global security
  • resource allocation
  • expertise
  • international aid
  • dependency and development
  • sustainable solutions
  • local and global initiatives
  • community resilience
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