An increasing number of children have become hooked on fast food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?

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In today's world, many young kids are preferring street
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and unhealthy soft
drinks
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which does not have any nutritional values and it is drastically climbing in peak.
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, many
children
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are suffering
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health issues
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as fatness due to
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improper
food
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.
This
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major problems of child obese and the feasible solutions to overcome
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with, one of the problems is considered
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plumpness. In the current generation, especially adolescents are taking unhygienic fast foods which
contains
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unsaturated
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and excess level of sugar and fat and
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drinks
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cool
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which ultimately effects the health of the kids
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as obesity.
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, nowadays parents are
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hugely responsible
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children
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fitness. In
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era, both parents are working and unable to cook healthy and protein
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for their
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and they prefer to take dinner from outside restaurants.
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, kids are suffering from obese.
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, well-known
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centers
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and online
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ordering attracts teenagers with
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of fast-
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items
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and special
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and many
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and school canteens
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offering contaminated
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which youngsters eat and results in fatness. As a solution to
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problems,
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, the government should take initiative in inquiring
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junk foods and aerated
drinks
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which are unhealthy for
children
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. In fact, the nation should ban all prohibited
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items
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or they need to keep taxes on
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items
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which might slightly decrease the
children
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unhygienic
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and prevent
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obesity.
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, every parent should take ownership of their child fitness by taking primitive steps by preparing healthy
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at home and giving fruit juices and protein milk
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of soft
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, India is a perfect example by implementing huge taxes on
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items
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mainly on restaurants and fast-
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centers
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to take care of
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the young
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generation fitness level and avoid
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plumpness. In conclusion, the
children
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who addicted to junk
food
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and nonalcoholic
drinks
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are increasing alarmingly and majorly suffering
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weight issues during younger age.
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, if
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the government
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takes necessary actions towards
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this
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concerns,
then
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indirectly they are making youngsters health fit.
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