An increasing number of children have become hooked on fast food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?

In today's world, many young kids are preferring street
food
and unhealthy soft
drinks
which does not have any nutritional values and it is drastically climbing in peak.
Also
, many
children
are suffering
with
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health issues
such
as fatness due to
unproper
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improper
food
.
This
essay will elaborate
the
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major problems of child obese and the feasible solutions to overcome
it
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them
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.
To begin
with, one of the problems is considered
as
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plumpness. In the current generation, especially adolescents are taking unhygienic fast foods which
contains
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unsaturated
food
and excess level of sugar and fat and
drinks
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drink
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cool
drinks
which ultimately effects the health of the kids
such
as obesity.
Next
, nowadays parents are
also
hugely responsible
in
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children
fitness. In
this
era, both parents are working and unable to cook healthy and protein
food
for their
children
and they prefer to take dinner from outside restaurants.
As a result
, kids are suffering from obese.
For example
, well-known
food
centers
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centres
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and online
food
ordering attracts teenagers with
variety
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of fast-
food
items
and special
drinks
and many
office
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and school canteens
also
offering contaminated
items
which youngsters eat and results in fatness. As a solution to
above
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the above
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problems,
firstly
, the government should take initiative in inquiring
street
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about street
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junk foods and aerated
drinks
which are unhealthy for
children
. In fact, the nation should ban all prohibited
food
items
or they need to keep taxes on
that
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those items
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items
which might slightly decrease the
children
unhygienic
food
and prevent
from
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obesity.
Secondly
, every parent should take ownership of their child fitness by taking primitive steps by preparing healthy
food
at home and giving fruit juices and protein milk
instead
of soft
drinks
.
For Instance
, India is a perfect example by implementing huge taxes on
food
items
mainly on restaurants and fast-
food
centers
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to take care of
young
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the young
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generation fitness level and avoid
from
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plumpness. In conclusion, the
children
who addicted to junk
food
and nonalcoholic
drinks
are increasing alarmingly and majorly suffering
for
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weight issues during younger age.
Hence
, if
government
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the government
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takes necessary actions towards
this
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concerns,
then
indirectly they are making youngsters health fit.
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