Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these to aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The economic development in the developed countries has led to various environmental
catastrophe
. Fix the agreement mistake
catastrophes
While
many people argue that attaining economic benefits for a nation cannot co-exist with a clean environment
, some believe that this
can be achieved. In
my perspective, I believe that maintaining a healthy Change preposition
From
environment
is possible even for economically developed nations.
Industrial evolution has majorly contributed to the degradation of nature
and its resources. On one hand, industries are necessary for a country’s prosperity, however
, erecting factories have
led to an increase in global threats Correct subject-verb agreement
has
such
as climate change, loss of biodiversity and tremendous pollution. Industrial waste is released into the atmosphere and water bodies in form
of toxic chemicals and harmful gases which ultimately Correct article usage
the form
is leading
to the deprivation of the quality of our Wrong verb form
leads
environment
. For instance
, studies have shown that Earth’s temperature has increased by two degrees due to
the heavy emission of greenhouse gases from companies. There is thus
no doubt that economic progression in various nations has polluted our nature
.
However
, it is still possible to preserve a significant amount of nature
against these dangerous effects. Firstly
, before emitting or dumping any waste material, it should be thoroughly recycled. This
will not only help in reusing the products but also
led
to the segregation of toxic waste materials, eventually releasing clean energy in the air and the biosphere. Wrong verb form
lead
Secondly
, industries should seriously undertake the project of the plantation as trees help in maintaining the balance in nature
as it
Correct pronoun usage
they
absorbs
carbon dioxide which is discharged from these production units. Correct subject-verb agreement
absorb
For example
, in Canada, the government has implied that every manufacturing unit must plant at least a hundred trees every year. It, therefore
,therefore
indicates that adapting these factors will help in effective economic as well as
environmental development.
In conclusion, focusing on countries economics’
welfare comes with a price. Change noun form
economics
Nevertheless
, if corrective actions are taken into implementation simultaneously against it, there is a chance to flourish a clean environment
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Your introduction and conclusion are appropriately presented, providing a clear structure to your essay. However, there are some instances of logical inconsistency and lack of clarity in the main points. Make sure to maintain a clear and logical progression of ideas throughout the essay.
task achievement
You have provided a comprehensive response to the task, addressing both views and expressing your opinion. Your ideas are relevant and supported with specific examples. However, be mindful of logical progression and clarity in presenting your main points.