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People nowadays are more interested in technology rather than their physical fitness .to what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #technology #fitness
In
this
 modern world,
technology
 is so important that
people
 can not survive without it and today pupil gives much preference to
technology
 rather than to spent some time on their physical fitness. I strongly agree with
this
 statement.
To begin
 with, as we know every individual is so busy in his life that they totally forgot about their health and because of
technology
 like mobile phone, computers or surfing on the internet, that makes
people
's busy schedule and a heavy load of work so they cannot give extra time for daily routine exercises or any physical activities
such
 as gym, cardio or jogging etcetera.
Moreover
, humans are showing their interest in technologies so much that now they are dating online or even some pupil doing marriage or engagement on online, who lives in another country or they cannot go back to their country they doing by the internet.
Furthermore
, due to the covid-19 situation,
people
 cannot go to the gyms because of stay at home orders by the government and
that is
also
 one of the reasons that
people
 more like
technology
 because the covid-19 makes humans lazier
for instance
, during the lockdown period,
people
 just stayed at home with their families and watch tv shows and using mobiles all the time that makes them more dependent to use
technology
. In the end,
people
 should avoid
technology
 and start the workout.
Moreover
, the government should have to motivate their community
people
 to less use
technology
 and focus on their health.
Submitted by Simranjeet Singh on

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