The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures illustrate the
number
of international and local Use synonyms
students
who enrolled in the university in Australia between 2001 to 2010. Use synonyms
While
the Linking Words
number
of international Use synonyms
students
was growing, the Use synonyms
number
of local Use synonyms
students
was fluctuating over a decade period.
In 2001, the Use synonyms
number
of new international applicants Use synonyms
of
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the
university in Australia is around 10000 pupils and it had an inclined trend. Correct article usage
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However
, the trend was weakling in 2010 because the enrollment Linking Words
number
was not as high as in previous years, it only had around 40000 new applicants. It made the total Use synonyms
number
of foreign college Use synonyms
students
in Australia from 20000 in 2001 and rocketed to 80000 in 2010.
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On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of new local applicants Use synonyms
was
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noticeable
fluctuate between 2001 to 2010. It had approximately 200000 new Change the word
noticeably
students
every year. The locals were indeed the majority in the universities with total Use synonyms
students
of 400000 in 2001, but the total Use synonyms
number
was constant Use synonyms
around
60000 from 2007 to 2010.Change preposition
at around
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