The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures illustrate the
number
of international and local students
who enrolled in the university in Australia between 2001 to 2010. While
the number
of international students
was growing, the number
of local students
was fluctuating over a decade period.
In 2001, the number
of new international applicants of
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to
the
university in Australia is around 10000 pupils and it had an inclined trend. Correct article usage
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However
, the trend was weakling in 2010 because the enrollment number
was not as high as in previous years, it only had around 40000 new applicants. It made the total number
of foreign college students
in Australia from 20000 in 2001 and rocketed to 80000 in 2010.
On the other hand
, the number
of new local applicants was
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noticeable
fluctuate between 2001 to 2010. It had approximately 200000 new Change the word
noticeably
students
every year. The locals were indeed the majority in the universities with total students
of 400000 in 2001, but the total number
was constant around
60000 from 2007 to 2010.Change preposition
at around
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