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Influence of human beings on worlds ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. what are the primary causes of the loss of biodiversity? what solutions can you suggest?

#influence #beings #worlds #ecosystem #extinction #species #loss #biodiversity
It is clear that human beings make a big impact on the
planet
 itself and the world’s ecosystem. The people’s will to make the
planet
 same and comfortable place leads to the continuous extinction of certain
species
 and
as a result
 the bio-diversity constantly. In
this
essay
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 I will explain the major factors which preceded the current condition in
world’s
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the world’s
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 ecosystem as well as suggest several steps which can lead to
amelioration
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 of the situation.
To begin
 with, the human being has always been a complex process
which
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 has arisen
long
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 time ago. Alongside with emergence and prosperity of humans, the diversity of other biological
species
 constantly decreased. The are superalloys explanations for
this
:
firstly
, in the ancient
time
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 humans were hunting on weaker
species
. In
this
 way, extinction is not a modern problem
which
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 has arisen together with the birth of humanity.
However
although
 in
the
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ancient time hunting was used more for practical objectives, nowadays the amount of people hunting on other
species
 as
an
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entertainment has rapidly increased. In my
opinion
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 the current situation can be improved by accepting the fact that we are not the only
species
 on the Earth and other
species
 have the same right to live alongside
with
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us. I strongly agree that the key to solving all problems is in the mindset and in order to prevail on the problem, we have to respect each creature who lives on the same
planet
with
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 us. I believe that there is a correlation between changing the mindset and old schemas to the new beliefs which suggest supporting the bio-diversity and keeping
planet
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 as well as all its population save. To conclude,
although
 there a
visible
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 negative impact of human beings on
world
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the world
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 ecosystem and extinction of
species
, it is in our power to make a comprehensive change to the
further
 history of the
planet
.
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