There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: • introduce yourself • describe the importance of the park • say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

Dear Frank, I hope you are doing fine with your studies and taking care of your health. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that my grandmother suffered a heart attack yesterday, as you know that my parents are not at home at
this
time, and the doctor said that I have to take care of her because her condition is critical due to the weakness. I apologize for
this
unexpected tragedy, and
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have to cancel my visit. I know you are excited to meet me but I cannot change
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destiny. I informed my parents, and they are returning from their vacation. I consulted with the doctors, they said, she will recover her health within the
next
two weeks. That means
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I can visit you
next
month
instead
of
this
month. I already bought airline tickets and my flight will land on 22nd November. I hope you will understand my situation. The
last
thing does not forget to bring your Mustang car to pick me from the airport. I wish you good luck. Your best friend, Dilpreet.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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